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Tuesday, 1 April 2014
a letter from Gallpoli
1 comment:
Anonymous
said...
Dilan, you have written a great letter so far. There is just one place where you are a little confused about what you are writing. If you are at the war you cannot be a coward, even if you are afraid and don't want to be there. You have actually made your parents proud in that situation.
1 comment:
Dilan, you have written a great letter so far. There is just one place where you are a little confused about what you are writing. If you are at the war you cannot be a coward, even if you are afraid and don't want to be there. You have actually made your parents proud in that situation.
Well done and good effort Dilan.
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