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Tuesday, 1 April 2014
Who am I poem
1 comment:
Anonymous
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Well done Dilan with this attempt at the Who Am I ? poem.
Everything is fine except for the personification line: "I eat KFC" is not personification. Personification is when you give human feelings, emotions and characteristics to something that is live e.g the moaning wind. The wind doesn't really moan like people do, but it often sounds to us as if it does.
You will need to change that line.
Keep up the good effort and I like the pictures you have chosen for your poem.
1 comment:
Well done Dilan with this attempt at the Who Am I ? poem.
Everything is fine except for the personification line:
"I eat KFC" is not personification. Personification is when you give human feelings, emotions and characteristics to something that is live e.g the moaning wind. The wind doesn't really moan like people do, but it often sounds to us as if it does.
You will need to change that line.
Keep up the good effort and I like the pictures you have chosen for your poem.
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